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LOU

Trapped in an alley, and I can't run

Facing a man with a cross and a gun

His face is blue

He says my name is Lou

And it's my sacred duty to kill you

His eyes flick around, gun falls to the ground

He throws the cross in the sewer and before I can run he says

I'm a talker, not a doer

His face turns bluer

As he falls to the sewer

Hits his head and is still

Dead eyes on the man he would kill

It starts raining where no one had seen

No camera recording this thing from a dream

And I just want to go home

RaaChenn 7 June 11
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Maybe I should post something a little similar - but taken from real life.

Petter Level 9 June 11, 2018

Just done so. Laugh, and laugh and Laugh

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Bodycam came to mind. Seems like a fun write.

azzow2 Level 9 June 11, 2018
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Try valerian.

FrayedBear Level 9 June 11, 2018
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I sincerely hope this is not based on a story from your life.

pixiedust Level 8 June 11, 2018

@RaaChenn I live in that world my self.

@RaaChenn Good to know. It is, unfortunately, very like things that have happened to friends of mine.

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