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STARVING IN THE USA

I am dying, I am sick

My skin is yellow and my liver's slick

For weeks I've been starving

The body's vengeance carving

What is left of me

My face in the mirror is like a wino's, you see

Like a street addict I am filthy and sickly thin

Doesnt matter why, or matter where I've been

Will I know the claw that grabs me?

Will I know dying before I know death?

The living carry death within, you see

The prescient foretaste of a bitter memory

But the dead are beyond death

Only the living have it on their breath

RaaChenn 7

Answer 1

Interesting point of view.

Answer 2

Wow! That brings me to attention! But, I live!

Answer 3

Very good! I particularly like the line "The prescient foretaste of a bitter memory".

Answer 4

I can see this written by someone in some 3rd world country but USA? There is loads of help if you know where to look.

Answer 5

Conceptualize consequences. That is an interesting point at which you see things at to format your writing ideas. Good rune


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