Was just using my imagination and created this one day in the long ago past.
Land Shark:
Nestled beneath the earth hunched down in the lea the stalks of vender tremble and rumble restless there is no time to delay.
Scurry and hurry all in a panic the woodland creatures freeze in their tracks anticipating the melee from a covert attack.
Quivering elms undulating from the wake of soil what a recoil toss all animate into a foil.
Lunging teeth beneath pitter patter feet the enormous beast is about to feast.
Like a harpoon crack of thunder flash of insight in calm dusky sky strikes the beast ends the day without delay.
Was this yesterday or today perhaps newmarro.
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I like it. I think the word "maylay" should be "melee" unless you intended something different.
Tomfoolery33
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June 24, 2018
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Thank you. I could not figure out the spelling and spell check kept wanted to separate it. I do really appreciate the advice thank you.
@azzow2 Sure thing.
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