Okay one more then I am done
So the dirge is done.
The words fall into the deep abyss, extinction.
Darkness, like the souls of lost men on wooden ships and empty seas, shrouds the night.
I pull you close to me and whisper.
You make me feel so real.
You laugh and sigh and look deep within my dark brown eyes.
I wonder if I could even breathe without your love
The moon weeps.
The air is bitter and cold.
A goddess smile lights up the sky.
Wrapped beneath four blankets for warmth, I dream of you holding me close.
Somewhere across the city, lost in the loneliness of night, I hear you sing in the morning.
The sun begins to wake the rest of the world with new light.
I want to hear your song for the rest of my life.
The moon weeps.
The air is bitter and cold.
A goddess smile lights up the sky.
Wrapped beneath four blankets for warmth, I dream of you holding me close
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Feel free to reply to any comment by clicking the "Reply" button.Your piece is deeply romantic...innocent and naive, before 'life,' sets in...lol. I can say that because, I am on the practical side of life now! I will contribute something of my own, when I think on it!
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@Ciravolostone I will go back and studied it again...maybe,it was my mood. I don't always get things...
@Ciravolostone back again...it tells me, someone, is yerning for their love! Maybe the 'innocent and naive' does not apply here? Do you know the writings of James Cavanagh? (Hope I spelled right). I had 2 books of his wonderful poems and I gave them to my son, and now I miss them!
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