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VAMPIRE IN THE SUN

My love has wings, such gossamer things, elusive like the dawn

In a place where the sun shines once a year for an instant then is gone

Your words of doubt shred me like the staples from a gun

And a part of my heart disintegrates like a vampire in the sun

Behind these cold assassin's eyes burns a wall of living flame

That rages even hotter at the whisper of your name

So lock this with your treasures behind some teakwood door

Or tear it up in pieces and cast it out the door

I can never read your heart because you never give a clue

So I'll sit here quietly waiting while you do what you will do

RaaChenn 7

Answer 1

I like it. Good poem.

Answer 2

Eerie yet evocative. I will share this with my daughter. The poem reminds me of a vampire painting she interpreted for a Living Arts contest.


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