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(sorry this one is a bit long)

Elective Affinities

In the vastness of space
There are stars that choose
to revolve around each other.
We met -
as random as comets passing
our own paths predetermined
unwavering...
or so we thought.
With that first boyish grin
my orbit was revised.
I don't know -
was it my laugh, perhaps my smile?
that drew you in closer.
Maybe it was it gravity,
or magic-
that began our
elective affinity?
say what you will -
the effect is undeniable...
The energy created between us
filled the air.
pulling us closer...
Coffee?
sure...
Conversation
unending...
my place?
no mine...
You drank whiskey
I prefer wine
You love this song -
so do I...
Slow dancing ~
melting into a kiss.
Statistical differences
fade into nothingness....
The warm sensation
of our hands,
learning the landscape
of the other's body.
Tongues the exploration.
Clothes leave the equation.
The energy pulling you
into me
impossible to resist.
my orbit irrevocably changed -
forever whirling
around
you.

Dee138 6 June 3
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1

That is one serious and touching poem,makes me feel and relate to each verse as it goes. Please; keep writing and posting!

1

Excellent poem, with some great phrasing. Much appreciated!

rcandlish Level 7 June 3, 2018
1

The intertwining of personalities the best part of a relationship as long as you both realize that change is a matter of opinion. Good write

azzow2 Level 9 June 3, 2018
1

It comes through successfully! The passion is there!

tioteo Level 8 June 3, 2018
2

I think it's just the right length to say what you it has to say - very beautiful!

HeraTera Level 7 June 3, 2018
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