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I am writing third paper at college. I want to describe Jesus and God and their never full-filled promises and the continued strong hysterically of Christians towards them. I want to make it as funny as possible and the same time awakening my readers to the reality of life. I want to present this mysterious narcissist Jesus to my classmates and my English professor. In fact, my paper is titled "Confrontation with narcissist mysterious Jesus".

Or anyone can suggest a better tittle? Who can help me with writing ideas that I must insert in here and there? Would anyone want to edit my draft before I submit?

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I'd be down for helping to edit. Also agree with what everyone else said about the title.

Neraven Level 6 Mar 10, 2018

Thank you. I will it tomorrow in your inbox.

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I think your title should be much more subtle and not give away the entire premise in the title. Lead the reader down a path that surprises them at the end. Perhaps with titles like Encounter with Another Jesus or Encounter with a (Mysterious) Narcissist.

Wrytyr Level 7 Mar 8, 2018
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If your looking for funny narcissist jesus nutters. You do with taking a look at southcottians. A very obscure english sect, followers of Joanna Southcott. She believed (in her late 40`s) that she was going to give birth to the 2nd coming. It turned out to be an hysterical pregnancy Anyway if start with those guys and laugh at their idiocy, the rest just falls into place.

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