Hi all.
Here's a link (it's on my own web domain) to one of my short stories.
[mojacar.ws]
I wrote it some time ago. What do you think of it?
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Feel free to reply to any comment by clicking the "Reply" button.@Petter -- Ha..! Justice ordered. Justice served. Well done, mate. Well done. Although I partially expected the ending, it was far more than anticipated. Published anywhere but your site?
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Apr 8, 2018
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Thank you. I have made a few printouts for friends, but have not published elsewhere to my site. At the bottom of the story is a link to some poetry on my site - most of which I have also put up on AllPoetry.com
@Petter -- There is ulterior motive for the question. I'll message you about it later. That is in several days. Some other things need to be taken care of first.
@evidentialist Ooh! Mystery! I am intrigued! 
@Petter -- No real mystery. I just have immense amounts of work to do before I can assemble the information packet for a new anthology I'm putting together. Originally I had thought that it would be by invitation only to my past writers, but last week I came across a couple of new writers who gave me literary whiplash and changed my approach. This piece you just posted is the third, so I'm opening up for anyone who can meet the requirements.
I have been called the O. Henry of Science Fiction because of my love of twist endings that come from a logical premise. This piece did just that.
@evidentialist I look forward to it.
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