Attempting to write a song with shakespearean phrasing and old art titles. So far: I only saw her stand just there, blue black eyes and flaxen hair. A nude descending a wobbly stair, and only meant for me. Please add a line or idea and let's see what we come up with
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I only saw her stand just there, blue black eyes and flaxen hair. A nude descending a wobbly stair, and only meant for me.
The girl on the wobbly stair.
Followed her down to the door at the bottom,
a frog on the doorstep was eating some flies.
Everyone stared at my new naked lady
and the tattoo of my face on her thigh.
Rugglesby
Level 8
Feb 26, 2018
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Is it just me or does the phrasing match with Green Sleeves?
You've established a tableau. Nice. Maybe there should be a question next. Who is she? Is this a wedding night? A secret tryst?
There's a reason I stick to prose.
Hicks66
Level 7
Feb 26, 2018
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ahhh helpful and helpful
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