"I was born about six thousand yers ago"
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Feel free to reply to any comment by clicking the "Reply" button.I am assuming this was his written lyrics? I've never heard the song before. Great ending!! 
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May 27, 2024
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Whose "written lyrics"? I'm sure you never heard it because I wrote it. Thanks, I wrote it very fast and didn't labor long on the ending. Actually, I may try another. I think it needs more of an ironic ending- more of a joke, like the story about forgetting the unicorns.
@fishline79 Sorry, I didn't realize that you had written the song. I liked it and thought the ending was great! If you feel you could improve on it more, please do post it when you're finished.
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