Failed Poet:
I want to write poems but haven’t the wit
to string words together so that they
both patterns in time and what I’m king
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I cut and pasted this from a Doc. Somehow it became corrupted and I didn't notice. 'king' should be 'thinking'
I can't see how to edit it, any clues?
That'll teach me!
Paul_Clamberer
Level 7
July 6, 2018
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There should be 3 rectangular buttons under your post one is "edit".
You have been struck by the fat virus that doesn't like thin or long words. It has also been known to remove god and several other words. Using the poem format seems to help preserve your words - start with [poem] and then end with [] containing /poem. So that it all looks like this:
@FrayedBear Thankyou, I managed to sort it
@FrayedBear actually i didn'tsort it after all. Every time I tried to edit it, it came out with another error.
I will try your square brackets next. Thanks for you help
@Silverwhisper Thankyou, I guess this one is lost and gone then
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