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Would you love me

if I sprayed
you with pheromones
and rose water
showered you in
gardenia petals

built a fire
in the street
in front of your house
and leapt about it
like a gazelle

sang like Sinatra
talked like Sean Connery
smelled like chocolate cake

dressed like a swell

what if I told you
that every day
you are the first thing
I think of

after coffee

would you love me then

Justjhon 5 Apr 10
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Nice van in your profile pic.. I had several of those in the 70s

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Sure, and I love that Standard poodle in your profile too. LOL

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Let's see... most of things described have scents, some have pollen, and smoke is ... smoke. I have a lot of sinus and allergy problems, so I'd probably back away, quickly. The rest of it sounds nice though.

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Oh Hell yeah! Especially the leaping like a gazelle part!

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Nice sentiments.

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Of course I would still love you. I would think you are really wierd however. Why would anything you stated have any affect on my love for you?

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I doubt it...she would probably think you were crazy.

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Very cool. There is a poetry group here if you're interested in posting this there.

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Wow tht will be awesome

Rosh Level 7 Apr 10, 2018
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